tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post1572963949981535352..comments2023-06-10T22:42:19.087+10:00Comments on Australasian Christian Writers: Creative Nonfiction Part 2 - Nola PassmoreUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-91878738487207744272017-11-20T19:30:02.719+11:002017-11-20T19:30:02.719+11:00The original link for Anne Elkin's travel essa...The original link for Anne Elkin's travel essay 'Of Danger and Beauty' is no longer available, but you can find another version of it at the following link: http://wanderlustandlipstick.com/wander-tales/middle-east/of-danger-and-beauty/<br />Nola Passmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08425394685430146759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-79506834659683074142015-03-17T10:21:09.335+11:002015-03-17T10:21:09.335+11:00LOL - Thought you'd like the clapboard. I was...LOL - Thought you'd like the clapboard. I was going to put an action shot from your trailer, but thought I'd leave that til the launch! It's amazing how scenes are natural to fiction and screenwriters, but people often don't tend to think of that when writing nonfiction. Am hoping to incorporate that into more of my writing. And we do have a lot of nonfiction stories we could work on together ;) Thanks for your feedback.Nola Passmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08425394685430146759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-32661080107126055282015-03-17T10:18:35.307+11:002015-03-17T10:18:35.307+11:00Thanks for that Narelle. It's frustrating som...Thanks for that Narelle. It's frustrating sometimes to see an interesting story dealt with in a boring way - I've begun and ditched a couple of biographies that were like that. Now I just need to remember to do it in my own writing. Thanks for your comment :)Nola Passmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08425394685430146759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-14707761746390614002015-03-14T00:40:29.518+11:002015-03-14T00:40:29.518+11:00Some very sound advice, Nola, and scenes are a gre...Some very sound advice, Nola, and scenes are a great way to structure a story, and as you demonstrated, including non-fiction works. (But my, that clapboard looks familiar ... ;-) Now there's a non-fiction story we could work on.)Adele Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15413445554710215786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-6741856701678749772015-03-13T18:52:24.708+11:002015-03-13T18:52:24.708+11:00Nola, excellent post! It's fascinating how fic...Nola, excellent post! It's fascinating how fiction writing techniques can be useful for non-fiction writers. I agree, there's no reason why non-fiction needs to be boring :)Narellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07665380446283721576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-3222930369680208042015-03-11T12:46:30.296+11:002015-03-11T12:46:30.296+11:00Thanks Nola - I hope to one day :)Thanks Nola - I hope to one day :)Jeanette O'Haganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11057798704247611224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-4623738964079269522015-03-11T07:11:56.452+11:002015-03-11T07:11:56.452+11:00Thanks Jenny. That's a really good point. Th...Thanks Jenny. That's a really good point. There are some facts that can be verified (e.g. the date and venue for that party where everything went pear-shaped), but different people do remember things differently or focus on different aspects. There comes a point where we have to be true to ourselves and seek God's direction as to how to present the information (as Jo suggested). Can be tricky though. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and good luck with those memoir pieces. Are you going to try publishing them?Nola Passmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08425394685430146759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-38315732020083544102015-03-11T00:49:34.682+11:002015-03-11T00:49:34.682+11:00Hi Nola - some great tips. As part of my course, I...Hi Nola - some great tips. As part of my course, I've had a couple of goes at memoir and one of turning a very fact laden memoir into a script for a film (using family memory as well as newspaper articles etc to help). I agree that we shouldn't invent scenes and be honest to what happened (even when that's not flattering) but it certainly can be hard to remember exactly what happened or the exact words that were used. And sometimes even the people were that were there remember it differently, or don't remember it at all. Research, checking with others all helps - but whatever we write is always our reconstruction of the past, not the past itself.Jeanette O'Haganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11057798704247611224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-84873714631183269492015-03-09T12:16:16.495+11:002015-03-09T12:16:16.495+11:00Thanks Jo - I'm so glad you shared some of you...Thanks Jo - I'm so glad you shared some of your insights. I was thinking of Soul Friend when I was writing the bit about reconstructed dialogue. I agree that conversations and events that never happened shouldn't be made up and called nonfiction (though some people have done just that and been caught out). But memories can be tricky things, especially if it's a distant memory. I like your idea of going back to the person involved where possible. I guess it can be trickier if you're writing about more sensitive issues and there's a good reason not to go back to that person (e.g. if writing about abuse, you probably wouldn't go to the perpetrator), but integrity is so important. I like your guideline of being comfortable within yourself and before God. That's a great suggestion. Thanks for taking the time to comment.Nola Passmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08425394685430146759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-3195370464941179522015-03-09T12:11:13.760+11:002015-03-09T12:11:13.760+11:00Hi Rita - Thanks for that example. Your friend is...Hi Rita - Thanks for that example. Your friend is absolutely right, but it's easy to forget. I know I sometimes forget that myself and start just reporting the facts about a nonfiction event, but there's no reason we can't make it interesting with all the drama of real life. I think it's a crime to tell an interesting story in a boring way. I've read a few biographies like that. But when they're well-written, they can really bring the story to life in much the same way as a novel does. Thanks for sharing your insights.Nola Passmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08425394685430146759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-86062150481635447572015-03-09T11:56:35.610+11:002015-03-09T11:56:35.610+11:00Thanks for your insights here, Nola. To comment on...Thanks for your insights here, Nola. To comment on your question re ethical issues in reconstructing events and conversations, I would have difficulty with making up events that didn't happen at all, although, after writing two memoirs, I can see how easily my memory might fail me re what actually happened on any occasion. That, to me, is why it's important to have manuscript readers who know what really happened and can give their perspective on things as well. As for recreating dialogue in my memoirs, I relied on memory, on journal entries and on knowing the person who originally said the words well enough to be able to reproduce a conversation that hopefully at least honoured the way he or she might have spoken, even if it might not include the exact words spoken at the time. Then, where I could, I ran the dialogue by the person involved. On top of that, I found I needed to be comfortable within myself and before God that there was integrity about the way I portrayed any conversation--I would not want to make up an entire dialogue that did not really happen in some shape or form. Hope all that makes sense!Jo-Anne Berthelsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09775045057529728396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-77695373165185069922015-03-09T09:45:49.948+11:002015-03-09T09:45:49.948+11:00So interesting, Nola. It backs up what a friend of...So interesting, Nola. It backs up what a friend of mine said, who happens to be a missionary. She teaches literature in an Ghanian college and encourages African Christians to write their stories.<br />When I was introducing her at a women's conference, I asked how do you make nonfiction interesting enough to hold your readers? In fiction you have heroes, villains, confrontations, etc...and romance. She answered without batting an eye, 'Because in nonfiction you can have villains and heroes, confrontations, etc...and even romance.'Rita Galiehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14586506137798711397noreply@blogger.com