tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post4432380661389163984..comments2023-06-10T22:42:19.087+10:00Comments on Australasian Christian Writers: Atlanta Nights: Writing DescriptionUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-10985826032159343322015-09-23T15:27:22.184+10:002015-09-23T15:27:22.184+10:00Iola, excellent post! Thanks for sharing your expe...Iola, excellent post! Thanks for sharing your expertise with us :)Narellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07665380446283721576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-77114812776773667932015-09-22T15:33:42.257+10:002015-09-22T15:33:42.257+10:00Oh, dear! Do you have any examples?Oh, dear! Do you have any examples?Iolahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199141868703826943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-36475566933418893192015-09-21T21:03:15.762+10:002015-09-21T21:03:15.762+10:00I'm sometimes surprised by how often I come ac...I'm sometimes surprised by how often I come across descriptions that jolt me out of the story. They are similar to Travis Tea's caterpillars but for real. Paula Vincehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02079952414990463270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-17154506087549551002015-09-21T20:46:20.425+10:002015-09-21T20:46:20.425+10:00"He" must have a good understanding of w..."He" must have a good understanding of writing, to be able to get things this wrong! Iolahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199141868703826943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-33444471009109738702015-09-21T09:22:31.159+10:002015-09-21T09:22:31.159+10:00The caterpillars got me too - plus the oh so bland...The caterpillars got me too - plus the oh so bland, generic and redundant description of the Polo Colo - so obviously 'tongue in cheek' on the part of Travis Tea. Jeanette O'Haganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11057798704247611224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-79315652159623178492015-09-21T07:47:01.635+10:002015-09-21T07:47:01.635+10:00I love monarch caterpillars ... but not as a descr...I love monarch caterpillars ... but not as a description for someone's eyes. Just no.Iolahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17199141868703826943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-515660504291275491.post-50147668867569891532015-09-21T05:49:10.106+10:002015-09-21T05:49:10.106+10:00Thanks Iola, I have to say the caterpillars had me...Thanks Iola, I have to say the caterpillars had me on an Entomology mind hike, too. Thank you Travis Tea for once again providing a good bad example. :)Catherine Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03947906623825971761noreply@blogger.com