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Monday, 4 July 2016

The Review Revue by Nola Passmore



A revue is a form of theatre that consists of songs, dances, and funny sketches.  Oh wait!  Wrong kind of revue.  I was thinking of book reviews.  But in deference to its theatrical homophone, here are some short sketches that outline what you need to know in order to write book reviews.

Reasons for Writing Reviews


  • They help authors - Good, honest reviews help to create a positive vibe around a book which in turn can increase sales.  Once there is a critical mass of reviews (e.g. over 25), Amazon will also start recommending the book to readers who’ve made similar purchases. Writing a review is one of the best ways you can support authors and publishers.


  • They help readers - Constructive reviews can help readers decide on their next purchase or library loan.  Is it the type of book you’d enjoy?  Is it well-written?  Is there anything you’d like to be warned about (e.g. swearing, graphic sex or violence)? Is it a light read or something that will stay with you long after the last page?  Reviews can help answer all of those questions and more.


  • They help the reviewer - If you regularly write reviews, you’ll sharpen your analytical skills.  What was it about this book that compelled you to keep turning pages well into the night?  Why did that story drag in the middle?  What made that particular passage sing?  As you answer these questions about the books you read, you can learn valuable lessons to apply in your own writing.



Guidelines for Writing Reviews


  • Be Honest - This might sound like a no-brainer, but it can be tricky, especially if you have reservations about the book and/or know the author.  However, the desire to support authors doesn’t mean you write a glowing review when there are a number of problems with the book.  Your integrity is at stake.  Readers expect you to give an honest evaluation so they can make an informed choice about whether or not to read the book.  An author worth their weight in fresh metaphors will also appreciate constructive feedback that can help them grow as a writer.


  • Be Specific - Don’t just say it was a fantastic book and everyone should run out and buy it.  For the feedback to be constructive, you need to identify the elements that worked well.  By the same token, be specific about what you didn’t like and why.  Perhaps you couldn’t relate to one of the characters because they were too perfect.  Maybe there were too many long descriptive passages that slowed the pace.  Specific details add credibility to your review.


  • Be Polite - Don’t feel as if you have to point out every flaw.  The aim is to help readers and authors, not to tear people down with your biting observations.  Imagine the author is your mother and think about how you’d like reviewers to address the problems in her book. 


  • Don’t Give Spoilers - “This book has a fantastic twist.  I had no idea the sassy hairdresser would turn out to be the killer!”  EEK!  You’ve just ruined the book for me. If you want to discuss your feelings about the ending, save it for your book club.  There might be more leeway in this when reviewing nonfiction books, such as self-help books and how-to books.  Afterall, it’s hardly a spoiler to know that the croquembouche recipe appears in the desserts section.


  • Follow Policies and Give Disclaimers - Before posting a review on a particular website, be sure to check their guidelines.  You should always disclose whether you have been given a free copy of the book for the purposes of review. Amazon also has strict policies about who can and can’t review a book.  For example, authors, family members, close friends or those with some involvement in the book (e.g. publishers, editors) are not allowed to post reviews. Sites like Goodreads are more flexible.  However, you should still give a disclaimer if you have any conflicts of interest.


Suggested Format for Reviews


There is no right or wrong way to write a review.  However, I’ve found the following format helpful:

  • Briefly say what the book’s about.  As an optional extra, you could also note any key themes.
  • Use the sandwich method to say what you liked and didn’t like about the book.  That is, start with something positive, then mention any problems or flaws, then finish with a positive.
  • Give a recommendation (optional).  For example, what type of readers would like this book?
  • Give any disclaimers where relevant (e.g. if you received a free copy or if you had any involvement with the book).


For an example of that format, you might like to read my review of Twice Stolen by Susanne Timpani.  It’s a bit longer than I would usually write, as I got carried away with the indigenous themes.  However, it gives you an idea of the different elements to include.




Where to Post Reviews


There are hundreds of potential outlets, but here are some of the major ones.

GoodreadsGoodreads is a great place to start if you’re a novice reviewer, as their policies are a bit more flexible than Amazon.  You can read their guidelines here.

Amazon – Be sure to put your review on the American and Australian sites as reviews don’t automatically cross over.  You can read their guidelines here.

Koorong Koorong is an Australian Christian bookseller.  Reviews are restricted to 250 words, but you can earn $10 gift vouchers for every four reviews they publish on their site.  Click on the relevant book on their website and a link will come up that allows you to post a review. You can read their guidelines here.

Books in StockBooks in Stock is an Australian company that offers a wide range of books, including Christian and family-friendly titles.  Click on the relevant book, and a link will come up to add a review.

More Information


To learn more about writing reviews, pop along to Iola Goulton’s workshop at the Omega Writers Conference in Sydney in October.  Iola has posted hundreds of reviews on Goodreads and Amazon, so she’ll have a wealth of experience to share.

Do you have some other sites to add to this list?  What do you look for in a review?  I’d love to hear your comments.


Nola Passmore’s poetry, devotions, inspirational articles, true stories and short fiction have appeared in magazines, journals and anthologies in Australia and overseas.  Although she’s a former academic with qualifications in creative writing, psychology, and Christian ministry; she’s found that you can never underestimate the power of friends, critique partners and mentors in the writing journey.  She’s a founding member of Quirky Quills and co-leads the Toowoomba chapter of Omega Writers. She and her husband Tim have a freelance writing and editing business called The Write Flourish.  

Friday, 18 March 2016

360 Writing Review



I’m very excited about my tenth novel, Beyond the Fight, being released in a few weeks. I’ll be planning a big celebration. But I feel it’s also time to have a 360 review of my writing. My desk is piled high with ideas and material for another series of novels, but I have mixed feelings which I’ve been wrestling with for a few months now. I’m wondering if others have gone through similar experiences and would value feedback and comments from other writers and from readers.

Being honest with myself about this has not been easy. Part of me responds to my love of writing and wants to dive into the next story. But there are other considerations. After ten novels I certainly can’t say I’ve hit the big time. I’ve never expected to make a fortune from writing or even to be a best-selling author, although that would be wonderful. However, I do believe my publisher has given me a fair chance to be a reasonably successful author, one worth continuing to publish. With only moderate success, can I expect a publisher to continue to support me?

Have my novels become too similar? Are readers tired of the forays into early Australian history, which has been the setting for all my stories? Has my writing style become too predictable? Am I not doing enough self-promotion and marketing? Do I need to work on improving my writing skills and style?  Should I take a break, perhaps a sabbatical, so I can come back to writing with a fresh approach? Do I need to accept that I’ve made my contribution to the world of historical novels and call it quits?  

And, central to my reflections, what is God saying to me about all of this? More recently I have eased back on the Christian content in my stories, in order to increase the likelihood of my novels being accepted into the cross over market. I’ve wanted to interest readers who are less likely to read overtly Christian material, and to introduce Christian beliefs in a way that draws readers’ attention to God in more subtle ways. Has this been a good idea? Has my writing not been bold enough in my acknowledgement of Christian beliefs? Is the lack of more overt Christian content been a watering down of my desire for my writing to be a witness of the love of God to readers? Is it worth trying to break into the general market or is it better to content oneself with Christian readers? 

Last week, after spending a lot of time reflecting and praying about all of this, I attended a View Club meeting where many of the members have read my books. It's not unusual for me to receive positive feedback from them, but this day I had three women come to me within a short time of arriving, to tell me how much they enjoyed my writing. The next day I spoke at an International Women’s Day luncheon and sold 45 books. I was greatly encouraged both days, but not sure if either experience suggests I ought to write more novels.

As I wrestle with these issues, I'm concerned that this blog may be too self indulgent for a public site, but I am genuinely wondering if other writers have this experience. When is it time for an author to sit back and honestly assess their progress/success? Surely this is something necessary in any career, or for any artist. And what criteria should one use? The number of sales? Breadth of readership? The kind of reviews novels are given? The author's passion for writing or sense of calling? 

Big questions. No clear answer yet. I’m sure I’m not the only writer who’s been through this struggle and I would be grateful to hear others’ reflections and comments. I’ve appreciated the support I’ve had from writers’ groups, readers, editors and my publisher, and thankful for those who have offered constructive criticism, rather than only unqualified positive feedback. I believe sharing our ups and downs, doubts and convictions, struggles and highlights can be really helpful. And I’d certainly appreciate your prayers.
Carol Preston



Carol writes historical novels based on her family ancestry in Australia from the First Fleet. They include the Turning the Tide series; Mary’s Guardian, Charlotte’s Angel, Tangled Secrets and Truly Free. Her earlier novels Suzannah’s Gold and Rebecca’s Dream have been re-released by EBP. Her new novel, Next of Kin, was released last year by Rhiza Press and her latest novel, Beyond the Fight will be released in April. You can see more about Carol and her novels on her website, her Amazon author page or FB author page .