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Showing posts with label inspirational romance. Show all posts
Showing posts with label inspirational romance. Show all posts

Thursday, 25 September 2014

The Doctor's Return - by Narelle Atkins


Amazon blurb:

Megan Bradley Is Putting Down Roots …

After years spent traveling the globe, she never expected to be back in her hometown sharing an office with her former sweetheart, Dr. Luke Morton. Megan is focused on building her business, and doesn't have time to dwell on past mistakes. But she can't ignore her feelings for the handsome doctor who works down the hall. 

Luke is afraid to trust his heart to Megan, knowing she may not stay for long. But as they work together, their romance quickly rekindles. When a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity comes her way, Luke must free Megan to choose between a big-city career or love and family…right there in Snowgum Creek.

Andrea’s Review:

There are a number of reasons I enjoyed this book. Number one, it’s by our own Narelle Atkins J Second, it’s about Luke, a character from a previous book who intrigued me back then, and I like spin-offs. Third, I have a thing for broken romances being made whole, especially when it takes place years down the track. I enjoy the tension created by those situations and Narelle didn’t disappoint. Fourth, it’s set in rural Australia.

It’s obvious this book is written for the American market; some of the sayings and phrases are definitely not Australian, eg. mom rather than mum, grill as opposed to barbecue, but I loved that. Why? Because the setting is pure Australia and it means our USA friends get to read all about our wonderful country. Narelle’s descriptive writing makes Snowgum Creek a character in its own right. I really want to go there!

For me, this is a coming-of-age story. Readers will know of someone just like Megan, or even relate directly to her. She has done exactly what she wanted – travelled the world, and experienced life outside of Snowgum Creek – but at the expense of her relationship with family, friends, God … and Luke. Coming back to her hometown is a challenge to say the least, one she’s not sure she’ll be able to see through, especially when an enticing opportunity comes her way.

Luke is glad to see her, but wary of entering into a relationship with Megan again. And why wouldn’t he be? Regardless, his love for her is stronger than his misgivings, and he risks his heart once more.

Even though the characters in a romance must get their HEA (Happy Ever After), the resulting up and down journey had me turning the pages faster toward the end to make sure they did.

The Doctor’s Return is a sweet romance, and I highly recommend it. Here’s hoping there are more Snowgum Creek novels to come.

Thank you to Narelle Atkins for providing a free book for review.

About Andrea Grigg:


Andrea writes contemporary romance. Her second novel Too Pretty was released on August 1 by Rhiza Press. Her first book A Simple Mistake was a finalist in the CALEB Awards 2012

Andrea would love to hear from you via her website or Facebook page:
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Monday, 6 January 2014

WRITING CRAFT - CHRISTIAN ROMANCE (Part Three)


How much sexual and spiritual content?

What do most inspirational romance readers (and publishers!) accept?


Saw these in Texas, 2009
This again depends on the readers own personal background and preferences.
As far as I am aware, most publishers are primarily  marketing to Christian Bookshops.
However, Barbour Publishing have sold their Christian Romance Book Club, Heartsong Presents, to Harlequin. It now comes under Harlequin’s Love Inspired Heartsong Presents line. At least in America they should be more available in any good shops that already stock the Love Inspired line.
How I would love to see these released in Australia and New Zealand by Harlequin Australia and made readily available side by side the other Harlequin lines in places like our department  stores. 

It is important that whatever kind of inspirational romance novel you want to write, do read publishers' specific submission guidelines. e.g: They are under Extras on the Harlequin website pages for their inspirational lines

I noticed their HP line requirements are still very much the same as Barbour required when I submitted to them back in 1992. For example, it states these are, “Contemporary and historical inspirational romances with an evangelical Christian worldview focusing on faith, hope and love.

Eleven Key elements are then listed, including:No drugs, alcohol, gambling, profanity or immodest dress. No dancing in contemporary stories. No graphic violence or sex within the course of the story.”
I am absolutely delighted that my hard-working friend, Narelle Atkins has signed a six book contract for Heartsong Presents. As far as I am aware, besides myself and one from Jennifer Ryan years ago, we are the only three Australians to have Heartsong Presents books published. I do not know of any in the Love Inspired line. Where are you all? Would love to have many, many more available for romance readers in our own countries.

Narelle is one of the administrators for our ACW writers' group and blog. Very Exciting things are happening in her writing life. Do click on her name and check out her website. 

The Love Inspired books are longer novels and the guidelines are similar but also includes: “Relationships that emphasize emotional intimacy rather than sexual desire.”

And I believe this should be the standard for most, if not all, inspirational romance novels whether they be the category kind Harlequin publishes or other single titles.  

There are publishers who may accept “edgy” romance manuscripts but I strongly suggest this is NOT wise for unpublished authors to try. All love scenes even between a husband and wife stop at that “bedroom door.” 

Of course these guidelines also include points about including faith elements in Harlequin books.  
 
Handling spiritual content. 

I hope you read a wide variety of inspirational romance novels. Which ones did you think included spiritual content the way you prefer? Were you challenged by the faith elements? Did you like having scripture references so you could look them up yourself? Were you blessed in some way? They should be the kind you need to study and try  to write.

Always take note of who published them but remember also a publisher may vary what they accept. Obtain the submission guidelines for the ones you would like to submit to. If you cannot find them on the internet, ask for them to be sent to you via email or post. And I strongly suggest you do that first before commencing your manuscript. Of course, the very best way is to go to writers’ conferences where publisher representatives are present so you can ask them specific questions!

 I have read some books over the years (including Heartsongs) that have characters only going to church, saying grace before meals, have ‘good” morals, but the characters really not very much different from many in sweet romance novels. Quite frankly, I expect more in ones I read but there may be other readers who simply prefer that. However, for me the spiritual lives of the characters has to be woven into every aspect of the novel. Having said that, of course no one likes to be “preached” at.
 
For all writers today, the catch-cry is to “SHOW not TELL”. This is even more important in Christian fiction.

Wherever possible SHOW faith by the actions or lack of action of the characters. Remember it is “by their fruit you will know them.” However, I believe how realistic these elements become in your book will ultimately depend on your own personal experiences – your own Christian walk and what you have observed in others. While any writer without any active faith of their own can research and study faith elements for hours, I doubt if those elements will always ring true. Showing your own faith and how you have seen or heard how God works in your own life will give the most realistic, spiritual content in your manuscript.
 
More "help" suggestions:  

I  have been a member of Romance Writers of Australia since it commenced and owe so much to this great organisation as well as the Faith Hope Love chapter of Romance Writers America. Over the years I have only missed attending a few of the great RWA conferences in Australia. It was such a thrill and privileged to meet other international inspirational romance writers in 1999 at RWAmerica's national conference. If at all possible don't miss at least one American Christian Fellowship Writers conference. The one Ray and I went to simply blew us away.
 
I have only been able to share so little in these posts about inspirational romance. There is more you should be aware of that romance readers - and publishers - expect. For example, space has not permitted me mentioning the special element needed for a romance book on that very first page, first paragraph to capture the reader. 
 
There are many “How To...” books and articles about writing  romance and inspirational romance available. As well as searching the websites and blogs of favourite writers, I strongly suggest you invest in some “How To” books.

Recommended:-

Writing the Christian Romance  As well as Christian romance, Gail writes sweet romance for Harlequin. It is also an e-book. Gail Gaymer Martin 
Heart & Craft  See the website of Australian romance author, Valerie Parv, especially her Writing Tips page. As well as her up to date information there, this book by her contains articles by at least eleven Australasian, multi-published romance authors.
Plot and Structure (Writers' Digest) The author, James Scott Bell is multi-published in the general as well as Christian market. I am looking forward very much to him being one of the keynote speakers at the Romance Writers of Australia’s annual conference next August.
A Novel Idea is fantastic for any Christian fiction writer. Published by Tyndale with articles by many best-selling romance writers like Francine Rivers, Robin Lee Hatcher, Karen Kingsbury, Kim Vogel Sawyer, Jerry B. Jenkins. 

So, as well as from these professionals, you’ve read various series like Harlequin’s Love Inspired Lines and books by your favourite single title authors from various publishers - hopefully including of course some Australian authors like Andrea Grigg, Rose Dee. Perhaps some of my own books also?

Have you now re-read your favourite books as a writer?
Have you tried to discover just how the writer made you want to keep reading?

You believe you have an idea that would make a good Christian romance novel. You’ve decided on what you thing is a good plot, chosen your hero, heroine and perhaps some minor characters. Better still, I hope you are now a little more aware of at least some of the expectations of avid sweet and inspirational romance readers. 

However, be warned. You need more than just an idea. You need a really GREAT Idea. The most important thing I can share with you is that you must have a really powerful, emotional story. I have read many books over the years that perhaps could have been written better. Better point of view, less typos and other technical problems that I wished had been edited. However, there are novels that contain some of these problems but have such a riveting, fascinating story I could not put the book down until that last page. And be warned, becoming a writer does make you notice these problems more than most readers and may jar you out of the story even more. 

Always remember, no matter the genre, “The Story” is the most important thing of any novel. It should be so powerful it gives many pleasant and sometimes very challenging “emotional experiences” from that first page to “The End".


Mary Hawkins is currently revising her latest Christian romance manuscript, Her Outback Cowboy, and still trying to put into practice what she has been learning about romance writing for nearly thirty years. Last December she celebrated twenty years since her first book, Search For Tomorrow, of 19 titles was published in 1993 by Barbour. She is excited it is again available as an e-book through Barbour’s Truly Yours Digital Editions.
Website and blog: http://www.mary-hawkins.com




Currently all her back list Heartsong Presents Kindle editions are on sale. Not sure when they will revert back to full price. (Unfortunately so far only Justice at Baragula, Book Three in her Baragula series, is available as an e-book )

Monday, 23 December 2013

WRITING CRAFT: Christian Romance - Part One


So just what is a Christian romance novel?
The Romance Writers of America classify this romance sub-genre as Inspirational Romance. Their website says they are “Novels in which religious or spiritual beliefs (in the context of any religion or spiritual belief system) are a major part of the romantic relationship.”

Many great Christian fiction single titles do have a romantic relationship between main characters but are not actually romance books, just novels with romantic elements. Please note that many avid romance readers become disappointed if a novel is classified as “romance” but they discover it does not focus on the romance as should all romance genre novels. Other readers who do not like reading romance books may be upset if they buy a romance not clearly identified as one.

So, what are the ESSENTIAL ELEMENTS in a novel that makes it a romance novel?
This is very important for not only romance writers but all editors and publishers of inspirational romance to be very knowledgeable about.

CHARACTERS
Much has been written to help writers on characterisation. Because romance novels are more character driven than plot driven it is essential to study and know how to create believable, interesting characters.

Both the hero and heroine must be chosen with the aim of intriguing the reader. Romance readers know there has to be a Happy Ever After (HEA) end. So, to keep the reader turning pages to see how that happens, both main characters must be likeable enough to make the reader care for them and want to follow their journey of overcoming all problems to reach their HEA.

The length of your novel will also dictate how many minor characters you will need. Remember that a 45,000-50,000 word length usually will not give you enough space to have more than one sub-plot with minor characters. Once you give a name to anyone like a passing servant, waiter, taxi driver etc, that person becomes a minor character to the reader.

Whatever the number of characters you need, choose them well so they only enhance the hero and heroine’s story. In one of my first manuscripts I unintentionally took the focus off the main romance plot by making a minor character and his sub-plot too important. Fortunately an experienced editor saw that and suggested a revision. However, it is still something I have to be careful of and one reason I am now writing longer novels to be able to include more about those characters.

For the hero and heroine at least, I believe you need to do a full biography that includes their attitude and history about spiritual things before that first chapter. Our Creator knows everything about us both outward and inwardly. You as the creator of your characters must know the same. Their spiritual journey should be revealed, interwoven throughout the whole story. It also helps to do a biography for any major minor character.

CONFLICT
I hope you have read and digested Anne’s excellent ACW blog last Monday, December 16th, on the Big “C” – conflict. As you plot your Christian Romance novel, do try to put her thoughts into practice.
The essential element of having a HEA conclusion means the conflict has to be intriguing and strong enough to keep the hero and heroine apart for the whole length of the novel. However, do be careful of having conflict between them that cannot be resolved. Again, the length of the manuscript is an important factor here. If you discover in the writing of the manuscript that you find it very hard in the middle of the book to maintain tension between the couple, look at the type of conflict. Beginner writers can often have a simple or unreal conflict that can be too easily sorted out and not strong enough to be maintained. Be careful the conflict is not just a misunderstanding that makes the reader wish they would just sit down and talk it out!

And that last sentence really leads into my blog next Monday, December 30th. Christian Romance (Part Two). Ever heard of GMC? Goal, Motivation, Conflict are essential elements in any novel. How can you adequately apply them to a romance with spiritual elements?

When choosing characters you need to decide on the kind of couple who have problems that keep them from a romantic relationship. I have only briefly mentioned Conflict here. To make the actions of characters in Christian romance novels relevant and believable, they must have GMC for doing what they do, whether right or wrong, to give the reader an essential “emotional experience” and a satisfying, HEA conclusion.

Next week: PART TWO: Goal, Motivation - and more about Conflict especially in spiritual matters.

Despite this busy time, would love to have your comments. Lets talk about characters especially in inspirational romance novels you loved or hated – and why.

Do have a wonderful, rich time of love and fellowship with family and friends this Christmas.



Mary Hawkins is currently revising her latest Christian romance manuscript, Her Outback Cowboy, and still trying to put into practice what she has been learning about romance writing for nearly thirty years.
 
This December she is also celebrating twenty years since her first book, Search For Tomorrow, was published in 1993 by Barbour.
 
 
 
 
She is excited her first book
is again available as an e-book through
Barbour’s Truly Yours Digital Editions.
 
Mary's website and blog for more information
about her other books.