I have a passion for waterfalls. I gave this passion for waterfalls to one of
my male characters in Streets on a Map.
There is something about the rush of water and the thunder of the water falling
that I find serene. When we got to the point where we had to leave the car and
walk, we investigated the information sign to find out how far to the falls. Wouldn’t
you know that piece of the information had been weather affected and was unreadable?
However underneath it informed us the round trip to take in the waterfall and several
other scenic sights was 7 kilometres. ‘How far can it be just to the waterfall?’
we wondered. We decided to give it a go.
The way led up a number of steep steps, then along for bit
then more steep steps. We began to wonder about the wisdom of our decision. We
saw people panting and puffing coming back. ‘How far we asked them?’ The man smiled. ‘Maybe half a kilometre.’ Even though legs were already protesting about
the number of steep steps climbed, we could manage more. On and on we went and
still no sign of a water fall. Many times we almost turned back. Our calves
protested. But sheer stubbornness kept us going forward. More steps and not all
of them going up as we expected. Some went down, before they turned back up
again.
Eventually when it seemed we would give up we heard the
waterfall. We must be nearly there. We pressed on. And on and on. Still no sign
of a waterfall. Obviously the man who’d told us half a kilometre must have forgotten
the other five or six kilometres, we decided. With aching legs and more than a
little dispirited, we continued.
The sound of the waterfall grew a little louder. Then we
turned a corner and we could see it a little. Another couple short of breath came
towards us. ‘How far is it?’ we asked. ‘About the same distance as you have
already come.’ We thanked him. We looked
at the path still curving upwards with myriad more steps. We thought back over
the way we had already come and all the steps we had to retrace the stairs to
get back to the car and made a decision. No way! We had been crazy to even
attempt it. We knew this was as close as we were getting to that
waterfall. A glance at each other and we
produced the camera. If you look carefully you will see the faintest glimpse of
that waterfall in the distance.
By the time we got finally back to the car we were stiff,
with just about every part of us aching. We collapsed into the seat with relief
and drove further on. When I saw a sign to another waterfall, the look my husband
gave me was priceless. However being the loving guy he is, he obligingly took
the turn. By this time a violent wind had sprung up. It was a case of dodging
branches falling off the gum trees as he drove. But we kept going and made it
safely to the lookout site. ‘If it doesn’t tell us how far, or it’s more than a
short stroll, I’m not budging,’ my husband announced. I could hardly blame him.
I felt much the same.
When we reached the sign it told us 100 metres. No worries.
Tired as we were, we could manage that.
So we got to enjoy the second waterfall more fully. Here are the photo.
Sometimes with writing it can feel like that first trek. We
keep pressing on and on and yet never seem to get any closer to the goal. We
have a choice - either to keep going or to give up and change direction and
head off somewhere else as we did with the waterfalls. It’s hard to know at
what point you stop trying to persist with something that doesn’t seem to be
working. It might be better to put it aside and start on something new. Later,
if you come back to it you may pick up why it wasn’t working before. I have done
that with some poems and fiction. Other times it may just be consigned to the ‘put
away and perhaps work on one day or maybe never pile.’
Yes, we could all say
‘pray about it,’ but sometimes God doesn’t make it as clear as we would like.
Of course the other alternative is He is not giving us the answer we want to
hear, so we choose to ignore it. So how do we know what we should do in this circumstance?
Over to you to see if you have any wise suggestions.
Dale writes fiction, poetry, children’s
fiction, bible studies and has written puppet plays and Sunday school lessons. As well as
writing and reading, Dale loves to sing. She is involved in the music ministry
at her church. More information about Dale can be found at www.daleharcombe.com or on her Write and
Read with Dale blog http://www.livejournal.com/users/orangedale/
Hi Dale - I agree that a pile to ‘put away and perhaps work on one day or maybe never’ is a good idea. Sometimes God simply doesn't answer what's not working with a manuscript. Or rather, English does not contain the words He needs to really explain what He wants. This is something I've noticed repeatedly. I have one book coming out next year that I didn't even submit to a publisher until recently because, for over 20 years, I've felt the Spirit say there was something not quite right with it. It took me all that time to get the message about what it was! So, I think the interior sense not to go on (at the moment) you've described, is a very valid one.
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ReplyDeleteI'm glad you pressed on in your quest along the Great South Ocean Road. Waterfalls are beautiful and well worth seeing. However, I appreciate your analogy to writing. I know just what you're talking about. A couple of times, I've put projects aside because they didn't feel just right, and then got a spurt of adrenaline for them several years later. And usually, I've developed some sort of insight or extra feeling for the theme, which I wouldn't have had if I decided to grit my teeth and work through it at the time.
Hi Dale - love those waterfalls!
ReplyDeleteI must admit, if something isn't working with my writing, I leave it for a bit. If nothing crops up, I leave it for a much longer bit and gather God is nudging me in a different direction. Sometimes the piece is useful, sometimes it's simply a writing exercise that leads me to another, better place. All the treks to the waterfall are appreciated, no matter how long or short.
Thanks for your post Dale. For me the never-ending trek to the receding waterfall applies more the the publishing journey than writing. Since getting back into writing at the beginning of 2012 I've revamped my original novel & almost finished writing the first draft of book number 4. I need to go back and reedit and realistically 3 years isn't a long time :) But I did reach that point with my ThD studies in 2008 - a difficult and heartbreaking decision but the right one at the time. To be honest it felt like the end of the road but God was whispering to me otherwise - and it took 3 years for me to listen and start along the track to that second waterfall. Sometimes I wonder what all those years pursuing my doctorate was about but I do know that nothing is ever truely wasted in God's economy as he restores to us the years that the locusts have eaten Joel 2:25.
ReplyDeleteThanks Annie, Andrea, Jeanette and Paula for comments. Have to say Annie I'll be looking with interest for your book next year after taking so long to come to fruition.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your 'waterfall journey' along the South Coast with us--my legs feel sore even thinking about your attempt to find that first waterfall! I have put a couple of writing 'expeditions' aside in my writing journey and know for sure I won't go back to one of them. But the other? Well maybe one day!
ReplyDeleteDale, lovely post :) I love waterfalls, too and I'm glad you were able to see the second one.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your post, Dale. Insightful comparing the waterfalls to writing. So true.
ReplyDeleteThanks Enisa, Jo-Anne and Narelle for stopping off at my waterfalls long enough to have a look.
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