Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by Renni Browne & Dave King
I give five-star ratings to books I know I’m going to read and re-read, and Self-Editing for Fiction Writers certainly falls in that category. It’s a book that was recommended to me by several authors, and I’ve recommended to others (who, in turn, have recommended it to others …).
If you are a fiction writer, this is one of the books you should have on your bookshelf. It’s not the first writing book you should buy (I’d recommend an up-to-date dictionary as the first book), and it won’t be much use until you’ve got a complete first draft that has been revised for plot, structure and characterisation. When you think you’ve done everything you can to improve the story, then it’s time to focus on line editing, which means it’s time to buy and apply Self-Editing for Fiction Writers.
The three main problems I see in fiction (especially self-published fiction, or fiction from certain small presses) are bad dialogue (and inappropriate dialogue tags), the tendency to tell not show, and the use of omniscient point of view. Self-Editing goes into all these issues in detail, explaining why you should (for instance) show not tell, how to spot the issues, and how to fix them.
It also covers subjects such as characterisation and exposition, interior monologue and personal voice or style. Some reviewers criticise Self-Editing for prescribing rules that make all fiction sound the same; I applaud it for showing why I find some fiction hard to read. The process of editing won’t take away your unique author voice, but it will help you refine and smooth that voice so your reader can understand and enjoy it. And isn’t that the point of writing fiction?
By Iola Goulton. I am a freelance editor specialising in Christian fiction, and you can find out more about my services at my website (www.christianediting.co.nz), or follow me on Facebook (https://www.facebook.com/christianediting), Twitter (@IolaGoulton) or Pinterest (http://pinterest.com/iolasreads).
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